Press release
i think that this example is very good and quite similar because it shows a lot of images and not much color which is something that it could do as well as it could hove a few more graphics or a border or headline but i think that it is good because it gets strait to the point and explains what it wants to do and shows what its intentions are
this is a better press release because it has a few images show of a bit about it but i think that it is a lot better just purely because it has color the red text headline and image shows us a little bit about it and it would stand out and make it look more interesting as well as the text is not a solid block it is spread out quiet a lot which is quite a good thing
this one in my opinion is my least favorite because it is very text heavy which is also not very spread out and it is very strange due to its lack of color and it is very boring and bland to look out but it does the things that it needed to do due to the big bold title and graphic
My press release
i think that this example is very good and quite similar because it shows a lot of images and not much color which is something that it could do as well as it could hove a few more graphics or a border or headline but i think that it is good because it gets strait to the point and explains what it wants to do and shows what its intentions are
this is a better press release because it has a few images show of a bit about it but i think that it is a lot better just purely because it has color the red text headline and image shows us a little bit about it and it would stand out and make it look more interesting as well as the text is not a solid block it is spread out quiet a lot which is quite a good thing
this one in my opinion is my least favorite because it is very text heavy which is also not very spread out and it is very strange due to its lack of color and it is very boring and bland to look out but it does the things that it needed to do due to the big bold title and graphic
My press release
Peer feedback
1 Patrick
A) thinks i am a gamer and a star wars nerd B) yes because he is a gamer as well and he was interested in the same games that i play as well C) he found the wanting to work along side Harrison ford and Steven Spielberg the most unusual
2 Joe
A) has a lot of interest in movie and gaming and the fact that i have a passion fro media B)yes and the fact that i enjoy star wars and the passion that in have for media C) the most revealing thing that he found is that i want to work along side Harrison ford and Steven Spielberg
3 Holly
A) she thought that i was relaxed and quite nerdy but not int her bad way because of some of my interests B) yes especially because i included a lot giving a wide rang e of my interests C) and the fact that i wanted to work among Steven Spielberg and Harrison ford
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